Lashes heavy. Tightened. Barren and wet. Pretty lips pressed. Tongue tied. Still with a sweat. Eye’s trembling, tracing back and forth. Bitter, broken, bruised, her unconscious conscious takes flight,
“Breath. Breath in. Breath out,” she whispers
“It hurts! I can’t!” she cries back
Every breath he gave, every word he spoke, the light he held inside her. It’s like a poison seeping through her veins. Her body screams. Aching with a false fire of defeat. Every memory, every touch of his skin. Clouded. Doubted. Replaying itself. An everlasting loop of destruction.
With every breath it crushes her
A heavy rock back and forth as she begs for an end. Fingers pressed. Arms stretched. Bare. Skin to skin. Palms sweaty, heart heavy
she cries
“Let it consume you. Memories flashing. Let it in. Poison seeping. Let it all in and, let it shatter what you thought was real. Let it bow you down to your knees. Distill your thoughts. With every half breath you take, Hold on to his love but lift his weight. Defuse the disguise. Give back his air, give back his light. Open the wounds he’s left and let it all bleed out,”
she breaths
“Bleed it out,” she smiles
©ELMDyck deScripted
with model Christy Perreaux
December 21, 2016 at 5:42 am
wow.
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December 21, 2016 at 3:54 pm
I hope that’s a good wow! Thank you for the read☺️☺️
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December 21, 2016 at 4:21 pm
A good wow… of course. Couldn’t you tell by my vocal intonation? 😉 I’d like to know more about you.. hit me up by e-mail if you ever feel like it… anthonytgorman@hotmail.com or grumpygorman@gmail.com. Cheers.
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December 21, 2016 at 3:53 pm
Phenomenal, you left me without words
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December 21, 2016 at 3:54 pm
Thank you ☺️☺️☺️
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December 21, 2016 at 4:16 pm
My pleasure. Always
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December 21, 2016 at 4:33 pm
Pain….. Pleasure….. Love…… Desire…. Emotions…… Feelings expressed.
From mind to heart to soul the words touch….
Eyes sees a scene already….
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December 21, 2016 at 4:42 pm
It was a hard one to share. Took a while for me to work up the courage to post this one it is so personal.
thank you so much for the read! I hope you smile lots today☺️❤️
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December 21, 2016 at 4:48 pm
Well once we pen down we have done the best thing for our heart and soul.
What we hold at times makes us weak, but once we see accept it we become stronger.
Life is too beautiful to keep it full of past old things which hurt us so it is nice to move….
If you are smiling there I am already smiling 😊😊😊
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December 21, 2016 at 11:47 pm
A amazing poem. I liked the set-up and the energy of the words.
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December 21, 2016 at 11:47 pm
Reblogged this on johncoyote and commented:
Please read the work of a amazing writer.
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December 27, 2016 at 2:53 pm
Thank you so much !! ☺️❤️
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December 28, 2016 at 1:45 pm
Was my honor and you are welcome.
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December 29, 2016 at 11:29 am
I was getting breathless as the piece moved forward. There was pain and a growing sense of unease that you have masterfully captured. Your choice of words and the details you grazed without going into gave this the air of a young bruise that must be handled carefully. It exposed you but also exposed how you are owning the experience.
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December 29, 2016 at 2:26 pm
Thank you!!! So much for your comment. This is exactly the feeling I was hoping to give the reader, I am so happy you’ve taken the time to share your thoughts. I hope you smile lots today☺️❤️
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December 29, 2016 at 2:47 pm
It wasn’t hard to catch that vibe; you have crafted it well. I hope you smile lots today too! Cheers!
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December 31, 2016 at 1:09 am
Yes, please!
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